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PostSubject: TREVOR FITZROY X-MEN MARVEL    November 10th 2012, 12:16 am

THE VILLAIN TREVOR FITZROY





LINK: mediafire.com download.php?trjmbrrl70xuzmz


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PostSubject: Re: TREVOR FITZROY X-MEN MARVEL    November 10th 2012, 12:23 am

Wow

You are the gift that just keeps on giving santa

Congrats on yet another release
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PostSubject: Re: TREVOR FITZROY X-MEN MARVEL    November 12th 2012, 4:48 am

This character is very good, it has a lot of good animations, some very unique. This is clearly one of your best characters. I like to see more detailed works like this one, very much improved and tons better!

I recommend the download Wink

I don't enjoy a lot of characters, even super professional works, but this one I have to admit was a very fun play for me. Was not expecting to have fun at all LOL

Man this made my night cheers
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PostSubject: Re: TREVOR FITZROY X-MEN MARVEL    November 15th 2012, 5:25 pm

off of ax's recommendation, i thought i'd check this out.

while its much more complete than your avalanche, alot of work needed.
- better detailing on sprites
- more sprites for animations
- command strings for gameplay kind of different
- while i liked your concepts, could do more. for example have him drain p2 like it mentions regarding his powers. wiki also mentions how he commanded some sentinels too

hope you look into doing more as he has potential Smile
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PostSubject: Re: TREVOR FITZROY X-MEN MARVEL    November 15th 2012, 6:12 pm

ok,let me give me feedback.

I know its one of your first chars and such, but I need to be honest (and we talked about this via pm other day): its bad.

-The sprites range from poor to bad, but the animations are all bad. Take his crouched weak kick...its bizarre. And people say "lot of good animations"? Come on, guys, this won't help him to be a better creator, it will just fool him

- He uses the same legs for almost every attack

-Everything needs work, from sprites, to animation, to sounds. Its KFM sound almost everytime.


I think instead of making one char after another, you should go back and finish or polish the chars more.
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PostSubject: Re: TREVOR FITZROY X-MEN MARVEL    November 15th 2012, 7:02 pm

@O Ilusionista wrote:
ok,let me give me feedback.

I know its one of your first chars and such, but I need to be honest (and we talked about this via pm other day): its bad.

-The sprites range from poor to bad, but the animations are all bad. Take his crouched weak kick...its bizarre. And people say "lot of good animations"? Come on, guys, this won't help him to be a better creator, it will just fool him

- He uses the same legs for almost every attack

-Everything needs work, from sprites, to animation, to sounds. Its KFM sound almost everytime.


I think instead of making one char after another, you should go back and finish or polish the chars more.

i agree with O on this, i also think you admin here should actually look at his stuff before hosting it as well. i left some feedback on his other releases as well. they need alot of work. avalanche... i expected better is all i will say
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PostSubject: Re: TREVOR FITZROY X-MEN MARVEL    November 15th 2012, 7:11 pm

Well I wasn't trying to fool him, I really do like those effects and attacks.

The fire look and the 3D frame thing is enjoyable, at least for me. Rolling Eyes

I even stated that I like to see more works like this one, implying that this work, having more work done than the others, is much more better, maybe it would encourage him to make more effort in his next wips to try harder and make more detail.

I like the honest feedback though, perhaps danubissecreto can benefit from some spriting help and tutoring?

danubissecreto, if you want I can help you out.

Why don't I start here?

starting from the basics



Proper merging of bases in wips




Next I notice the wip lacks some colors?Try this out



If you need more help, let me know, we can work together Wink Don't give up Smile
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PostSubject: Re: TREVOR FITZROY X-MEN MARVEL    November 15th 2012, 10:16 pm

You may not like my job, it is a hobby and develop the way I can with the knowledge I have I will surely get better and the idea is that by sharing something you can change or work cooperatively.

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PostSubject: Re: TREVOR FITZROY X-MEN MARVEL    November 15th 2012, 10:39 pm

@danubissecreto wrote:
You may not like my job, it is a hobby and develop the way I can with the knowledge I have I will surely get better and the idea is that by sharing something you can change or work cooperatively.


Its not a matter of not liking your job, and I know that you make it with the knowledge you have. This is exaclty my point: to show you what is wrong so you can learn and get better.
Everyone of us had pass through this, we are here to help.
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PostSubject: Re: TREVOR FITZROY X-MEN MARVEL    November 24th 2012, 1:49 pm

Gracias Mk Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: TREVOR FITZROY X-MEN MARVEL    November 24th 2012, 11:12 pm

Doom in this characters help Mik Rain but it├Ěs my creation with she. Mik not is in the forum
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PostSubject: Re: TREVOR FITZROY X-MEN MARVEL    November 25th 2012, 10:49 am

ohhh
ya veo...
gracias por compartir Smile
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PostSubject: Re: TREVOR FITZROY X-MEN MARVEL    November 29th 2012, 9:55 am

Links are down! send please


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